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Off the Bedouin Trails: The Sahara, Northeast of Al Jawf | |
SPRING IN THREES | |
THE DESERT, BLOOMING | |
WE READ IT IN THE PAPER | |
BENEATH A ROCK IN THE GARDEN | |
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EDITOR'S CHOICE - Spring 2007
Each quarter, we choose one poem to honor with the title of EDITOR'S CHOICE. This poem came from the May competition, The Desert, Blooming Off the Bedouin Trails: The Sahara, Northeast of Al JawfCOMMENTS: The lyric language of this piece is wonderfully contrasted with the danger of the desert. Fine phrasings, including "scorpions as silent as sea-shells/await mistakes," and "beneath a cornflower sky," and "ripe rosaries of dew," all point to a master of the craft. So well done, this piece takes your breath. |
The point of this exercise was to choose a form, Haiku or titled School Haiku (otherwise known as 5/7/5) creating a progressive series of three poems on one topic, spring. Each series could be titled. FIRST PLACE fern shadows============ SECOND PLACE - TIE desert sunrise============ SECOND PLACE - TIE Life and Death============ THIRD PLACE Awakening============ HONORABLE MENTION Ocean Beach, April 2007============ OTHER POEMS ENTERED INTO THIS COMPETITION ============ Delicate arms raise with butter drenched extensions as the sun fondles Orange sky beckons
Night shadows cover,
Linda Balboni, Franklin, MA, USA
Colour blasted fields
Sparrow hop on trees
Dandelions cheer
Aparna Belapurkar-Razdan, London, UK
limbs litter the ground
rhododendron blooms
Gary Blankenship, Bremerton, WA, USA
muddy sneaker prints
soap bubbles and chalk
tiny sour cherries
RJ Clarken, Hillsborough, NJ, USA
white stems stake dark soils
shedding withered bark
bedded in moist earth
Phill Doran, Johannesburg, RSA
Promise at dusk
Mother's Day
Mary E. Gray, Newport News, Virginia, USA
Unencumbered paths
Geese preening afloat
Orange blossom drips
Kathy Kehrli, Factoryville, PA, USA
river after storm
weeping willow in buds
Marek Kozubek, Zywiec, Silesia, POL
foliage rebirths
rambunctious risings
tarantula taps
Carol Dee Meeks, Artesia, NM, USA
Snow melt on mountain
Magnolia Blossoms
Sun sparkled snow flakes
Frances Schiavina, Ardmore, PA, USA
buds afloat
bluebonnets
Maria Eugenia Stanphill, San Antonio, TX, USA
Forties to fifties
Fifties to sixties
Sixties to eighties
Katherine Swarts, Houston, TX, USA
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FIRST PLACE Off the Bedouin Trails: The Sahara, Northeast of Al JawfCOMMENTS: The lyric language of this piece is wonderfully contrasted with the danger of the desert. Fine phrasings, including "scorpions as silent as sea-shells/await mistakes," and "beneath a cornflower sky," and "ripe rosaries of dew," all point to a master of the craft. So well done, this piece takes your breath. ========== SECOND PLACE Great Basin WatercolorsCOMMENTS: Another wonderfully lyric piece that uses rich language and fine contrasts to paint a memorable scene. ============ THIRD PLACE The Monument Valley ExtraCOMMENTS; Wonderfully written, beautifully staged, as strong and lasting as the rock art described. ========== HONORABLE MENTION Kalahari QuondamCOMMENTS: Beautifully described in precise, well-chosen language. ========== OTHER POEMS ENTERED IN THIS CONTEST ========== Mojave Rain Shadows Uncommon color pallets tint rain's blush.
Yet night dons flimsy weaves. Transparent wisps
Yvonne Nunn Hermleigh, TX, USA
ACT I: Denial and Isolation
ACT II: Anger
ACT III: Bargaining
ACT IV: Depression
ACT V: Acceptance
Kathy Kehrli, Factoryville, PA, USA Poet's Note: The Acts of this poem are the five stages of grief as defined
by Elizabeth Kubler-Ross.
The Bison move about purposelessly, grazing
on clumps of Muhlenbergia. The purple seed heads of this New Mexico
native grass offers them nourishing meals in the desert's deep drought.
Deer, coyotes, rabbits, and small reptiles vie also for the miniature
cattails of Deergrass.
Carol Dee Meeks, Artesia, NM, USA
The leathered nomad appears from no-man's land
What must he think of what he sees before him? He falls into an old encouraging mantra
His audience listlessly sits, listens.
In the morning, a set of footprints track into desolate scenery—
Brady Riddle, Muscat, Sultanate of Oman
Spring has come to the Great Basin.
Eileen Sateriale, Bowie, MD, USA
Light's needles sewing my eyes
Frances Schiavina, Ardmore, PA, USA
Andes rainshadow's creation.
Ancient mummies, its dry dirt stores.
There, in dead silence, landmines lost
And while motels, Calama boasts
Maria Eugenia Stanphill, San Antonio, TX, USA
Here in the Big Bend of Texas
Katherine Swarts, Houston, TX, USA
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FIRST PLACE Peace March in 4/4 TimeCOMMENTS: Strong writing, limited only by the form imposed by the competition. Nicely done. ============ SECOND PLACE ProgressCOMMENTS: Good descriptions written in a matter of fact way. Nice narrative. ============ THIRD PLACE Mt. St. Helens: 2004 - PresentCOMMENTS: Solid writing, good descriptions that capture the fear of the explosion, and what the future might bring. ========== HONORABLE MENTION The Bee PuzzleCOMMENTS: Good reporting. Solid writing. ========== OTHER POEMS ENTERED IN THIS CONTEST ========== Descriptive Deception His obituary read:
Not “unexpected” in the sense
Not “at home” in the
From a bullet to his own brain—
Kathy Kehrli, Factoryville, PA, USA
Ten years ago their mom made history,
The six active preteens run here and there,
Fourth graders now
included a personalized cake
Carol Dee Meeks, Artesia, NM, USA
The morning dawned, lithe cattails rode the breeze.
A ripple twisted, toe-tapped bays' wild dance.
Two motor boats raced to the waist-high slough.
A dome shaped craft emerged from depths of bay,
Yvonne Byrd Nunn, Hermleigh, TX, USA
He read in the paper he was dead
Tore a piece of bread
He made a few calls,
Frances Schiavina, Ardmore, PA USA
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FORM: Serious Verse or Light Verse Poets were asked to write a titled poem, twenty lines or fewer, in two
or three stanzas. about what might be literally or metaphorically discovered
next to, above, or below a rock in their garden. This competition
has two winners, one for light verse, one for serious verse.
Denrut Stegenot's Stone gets Turned========== FIRST PLACE - LIGHT VERSE Arthrospore DancersPOET'S COMMENTS: This is a double dactyl. EDITOR'S COMMENTS: From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia: A dactyl is a poetic foot of the form (ON-off-off). For example, matador, realize, cereal, limerick, etc. A double dactyl can therefore mean simply two dactyls in a row. A double dactyl is also a verse form, also known as "higgledy piggledy," invented by Anthony Hecht and Paul Pascal in 1961. Like a limerick, it has a rigid structure and is usually humorous, but the double dactyl is considerably more rigid and difficult to write. There must be two stanzas, each comprising three lines of dactylic dimeter followed by a line with a dactyl and a single accent. The two stanzas have to rhyme on their last line. The first line of the first stanza is repetitive nonsense. The second line of the first stanza is the subject of the poem, a proper noun (usually someone's name). Note that this name must itself be double-dactylic. There is also a requirement for at least one line of the second stanza to be entirely one double dactyl word, for example "va-le-dic-tor-i-an". |
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