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Winter 2005 Edition
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DIANE M. DAVIS
JOHN RICE
CRAIG SODERQUIST
PAULA MARIE BENTLEY
MARY BURLINGAME
MARY MARGARET CARLISLE
BETTY ANN WHITNEY


DEDICATION
To the memory of those souls who lost their lives in the recent tsunami, the bravery of the survivors, and the heroic efforts of those who went to rescue and stayed to rebuild, we dedicate these competitions.

FEATURED ARTICLES - Winter
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  • Poetry Works: "Precise Word Choice vs Bombardment of Imagery" 
  • Poetry +: Margaret Brown-Bailey

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    CONTENTS of this page
    LETTERS
    WINTER LAGNIAPPE:  TSUNAMI & THE RESPLENDENT ISLE
    JANUARY:  WINTER WEATHER (HAIKU, MIKU)
    FEBRUARY:  POET'S CHOICE
    MARCH:  HIBERNATION (BLANK VERSE)
    EDITORS' CHOICE: THE BEST OF WINTER
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    Letters  - The following letters may be lightly edited. 
    FROM:  Carol Dee Meeks, Artesia, NM, USA.  Your site is wonderful, and I have learned abundantly from it in 2004.  I hope I gain as much knowledge in 2005, and I'm sure I will (with all you have to offer) because aside from entering your contests and reading what you have, reading other poets' work is learning as well.  I look forward to more of SOL in 2005. 
    FROM:  Avonne Griffin, Greer, SC, USA.  Sol has been a wonderful influence on my poetry as well as the poetry of many others; who knows how many? I enjoy the challenges and the delicious poetry that comes from so many people, so many different takes on just one challenge.  Isn't it always fascinating to see? 


    WINTER LAGNIAPPE:  TSUNAMI & THE RESPLENDENT ISLE
    JUDGE:  MARY MARGARET CARLISLE

    FIRST PLACE - TIE
    WINNER OF A  $10.00 ELECTRONIC BOOK GIFT CERTIFICATE

    Tsunami Aftermath

    The one familiar face
    my neighbor's cat
    sits by the temple door
    still as a Sri Lankan god
    his eyes wild and golden
    his nose sifting incense
    his ears sifting sounds.
    Amid the clash
    of scent and sound
    he hears his name.
    With softened eyes
    and tabby faith
    he runs.

    Anna Wilke, Conroe, TX, USA

    COMMENT:  Deceptively simple in its length, nonetheless it manages to convey many layers of meaning in something as serene and everyday as a cat sitting by the door.  Nice imagery to describe the cat, linking in with other cultures' cat worship.
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    FIRST PLACE - TIE
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    Waiting for the Tide

    In the first colors of the rising sun
    I see lonely silhouettes walk the beach
    Silent vigils in the wash of the waves
    Mothers and fathers waiting for the tide.
    I see lonely silhouettes walk the beach
    In their quiet, they listen to the breeze
    Mothers and father waiting for the tide
    For a voice, whimper, some familiar sound.
    In their quiet, they listen to the breeze
    Beyond the waves tumbling to the sand
    For a voice, whimper, some familiar sound
    Mothers and fathers waiting for the tide.
    Beyond the waves tumbling to the sand
    They watch for the children returning home
    Mothers and fathers waiting for the tide
    From swirling waters that took them away.
    They watch for the children returning home
    Pray for a miracle, now friendly seas
    From swirling waters that took them away
    Mothers and fathers waiting for the tide.
    Pray for a miracle, now friendly seas
    Silent vigils in the wash of the waves
    Mothers, fathers still waiting for the tide
    In the first colors of another day's sun.

    James M. Thompson, Baytown, TX, USA

    COMMENT:  Cadence and rhythm are well-done here, with appropriate phrases chosen for the poetic form.  The heartbreak of the image is distilled perfectly, encapsulated into a morning scene which is, seemingly, mundane - but with a glimpse into the rending part of the meaning.
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    JANUARY:  WINTER WEATHER
    JUDGES:  JIM APPLEGATE, JOHN E. RICE, BETTY ANN WHITNEY 
    FORMS:  HAIKU OR MIKU

    FIRST PLACE
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    winter morning
    lone crow casts
    long shadow

    Janet Parker, Leesburg, FL, USA

    COMMENTS:  The vibrant imagery of this poem links earth to its creatures.

    SECOND PLACE

    saffron clouds gleaming
    transfigure clumps moldering
    leaves in earth’s cold mire

    Lynne Craig, Terrell, TX, USA

    COMMENTS:  This poet puts into visible form a mental image characteristic of the manifestation of nature.

    THIRD PLACE

    rain freezes
    willow branches
    chatter

    Avonne Griffin, Greer, SC, USA

    COMMENTS:  Good rendering of the awareness of nature.

    HONORABLE MENTION

    snow gums-
    scribble
    on white

    Lynn Harris, Hervey Bay, QLD, AUS
    COMMENTS:  This Miku shows that imagery does not have to be sacrificed even when using a minimalist form.

    HONORABLE MENTION

    winter stream
    under hare's traces
    muffled ripples

    Marek Kozubek, Zywiec, SIL, POL
    COMMENTS:  Photographic description puts the reader directly into nature, a well-done aspect of Haiku.

    HONORABLE MENTION

    cold snow
    only mouse trails
    visit graves

    Kathy Paupore, Kingsford, MI, USA
    COMMENTS:  Nice winter imagery.

    HONORABLE MENTION

    snow flurries
    on ancient paths
    suddenly new

    James M. Thompson, Baytown, TX, USA
    COMMENTS:  This poem brings more than one sense into play:  vision, the touch of cold, the feeling of movement down a path.  Nicely done.

    OTHER POEMS

    bawling calf
    feathered cracks diverge on
    shallow ice

    SJ Baldock, Lancaster, TX, USA
    COMMENTS:  The calf born out of season adds to the startling imagery.
    --
    leaves shrivel
    shudder then blacken
    naked buds

    Sharon Rothenfluch Cooper, Portland, OR, USA
    COMMENTS:  The harsh season is reflected in these well-chosen harsh words.  Nicely done.
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    Iced branches
    Loud snaps in silence
    Ruined trees

    Shelley Culver, Benton, KS, USA
    COMMENTS:  Direct well-done observational writing.
    --
    Rose-breasted Grosbeaks
    sit on nude hickory limbs
    wintertime brightens

    Kay Lay Earnest, Smyrna, GA, USA
    COMMENTS:  Excellent word choice.
    --
    snow cascades down
    moonlight shines through snow
    frozen lake reflects

    Jennifer Galvin, Stafford, VA, USA
    COMMENTS:  Nice images place the reader at the scene.  Lovely word choice.
    --
    icicle ensheathed
    briar epees hibernate
    attack surrendered

    Kathy Kehrli, Factoryville, PA, USA
    COMMENTS:  Interesting word usage.
    --
    white socks knee deep
    winter wallops region slopes
    skiers' field day

    Carol Dee Meeks, Artesia, NM, USA
    COMMENTS:  Nicely done Senryu!
    --
    sun prism rainbows
    die in winter warm front thaw
    machetes vanish

    Yvonne Byrd Nunn, Hermleigh, TX, USA
    COMMENTS:  Interesting narrative.
    --
    cold morning
    lone hawk
    feeds with small birds

    Jeanette Oestermyer, Roswell, NM, USA
    COMMENTS:  This easy-to-see scene puts us into the moment.
    --
    sun synergy
    slick slush sheen
    seeps slowly

    Eileen Sateriale, Bowie, MD, USA
    --
    frigid cloudless sky
    stars hang over snowless grass
    ice crystal shines

    Katherine Swarts, Houston, TX, USA
    --
    winter morn
    night concealed surprise
    tracks in snow

    Anna Wilke, Conroe, TX, USA
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     FEBRUARY:  POET'S CHOICE
    JUDGES:  MARY BURLINGAME, 
    PAULA MARIE BENTLEY, CRAIG SODERQUIST

    FIRST PLACE
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    Triolet for Fishermen

    Grey fishermen with silent nets
    trawl, deep beneath an autumn moon
    and from the shore are silhouettes.
    Grey fishermen with silent nets
    cast long, to haul while darkness whets
    the needle-points that fade too soon.
    Grey fishermen with silent nets
    trawl deep, beneath an autumn moon.
    The swollen heartbeat of the tide
    compels the fragile: rise and fall,
    while plunder rolls from side to side.
    The swollen heartbeat of the tide,
    where charcoal sea and sky collide,
    stays faithful to the siren’s call.
    The swollen heartbeat of the tide
    compels the fragile rise and fall.
    Ensnared in shawls, they reel them home,
    the daughters of the sand and shale.
    With wine-dark eyes and salt-stained comb
    ensnared in shawls, they reel them home;
    these tethered brides of spray and foam.
    As shadows form on faces, pale
    ensnared in shawls, they reel them home
    the daughters of the sand and shale.

    Phill Doran, Johannesburg, RSA

    COMMENT:  Lush and absolutely gorgeous; of particular note is the imagery resplendent in, "Ensnared in shawls, they reel them home, / the daughters of the sand and shale. / > With wine-dark eyes and salt-stained comb."  Absolutely beautiful and a delight to read aloud.
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    SECOND PLACE
    Infinity Will Mark the End

    Infinity will mark the end
    as it has from the beginning,
    for massive stars that make space bend
    don't skew the game to gravity's winning.

    Stars condensed from the primal flash
    then burnt and blown across the void
    reform new stars from heavier ash
    in galaxy spirals wide-deployed.

    Galaxies clump in widespread sheets
    that rush toward a strange attractor
    but from each others, all recede,
    pulled by an unknown, cosmic factor.

    And the universe fills with vacancy
    as starry gas more widely spread
    won't clump to stars as used to be
    until galaxies burn down cold and dead.

    Burnt and blown across the void,
    all from others, all recede
    as the universe fills with vacancy -
    Infinity will mark the end.

    Gary Wade, Seymour, IA, USA

    COMMENT:  Beautifully written.
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    THIRD PLACE
    Paratroopers

    Late summer, and the meadow
    Goes to seed with military precision.
    Dandelions, the advance scouts,
    Are joined by thick ranks of thistle
    And milkweed.  Salsify soldiers
    Leap from their stalks to sail away
    On the wind.  They hang in
    Huge white clouds, brave billows
    Of silk descending towards their
    Target.  The air is filled with them,
    Taking flak from the birds but some
    Landing safely to storm the grass.
    They advance ever downward,
    A few stalwart troops conquering
    The earth where they entrench
    Themselves to outwait winter’s siege
    And hold their ground until
    Spring brings relief.

    Elizabeth Barrette, Charleston, IL, USA

    COMMENT:  Lovely extended metaphor.  Visually satisfying in the sense that the imagery is overpowering and very well done.
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    OTHER POEMS
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    At Odds With His Retirement

    “The bathroom’s clean,” he states without looking up from
    the book he’s been reading all week. The bathroom’s clean?
    she mumbles, picking up the newly arrived Reader’s Digest
    and retiring to the throne to digest this information
    sitting amidst the porcelain and chrome. She kicks her shoes
    off. Glad to be home and out of the rat race where she
    generally finishes next-to-last place. The bathroom’s clean?
    Well, what of vacuuming? And dust? Someone must clear
    cobwebs; cook and freeze a whole week’s worth of lunches
    (otherwise he will not eat). The bathroom’s clean, though?
    She winces, for there’s sluts wool piled up in the corners
    and the mirror’s streaked with grime, but he says the
    thing’s clean ­a major contribution she must praise the
    whole night long while washing laundry, changing beds,
    getting groceries, paying bills. Attending ills like back-stabbing
    co-workers and nitpicking bosses who want their papers stapled
    at 90 degree angles, she commutes two hours each way.
    Monday through Friday. Same old grind but- hey! -he cleaned
    a bathroom today while she toiled for pauper’s pay.

    SJ Baldock, Lancaster, TX, USA
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    Tango at the Crossroads

    Standing at the crossroads.
    Our choice of where to go.
    Is the weather warmer?
    Kyoto’s far from here.

    So what are we to do?
    For it takes two to tango,
    and Kyoto’s over there
    while we are over here.

    All tangoing together,
    we may not get much warmer.
    But we are over here,
    waiting at the crossroads.

    Colin William Campbell, Kunming, YP, CHN
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    Can-Can

    At
    High tide
    The ocean
    Lifts her foaming
    Petticoats before
    Performing a can-can
    Along Waikiki beaches
    With weaving Hula dancers to
    Create Toulouse-Lautrec images
    Across sand that sparkles like ground diamonds

    Lois Lay Castiglioni, Galveston, TX, USA
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    Electric Rain

    under street lamp
    rain
    falls
    gathersinpuddles

    dapples pucker
    dance tarantella

    drops
    d
    i
    v
    e
    plunge    i n t o    s p r e a d i n g     w a t e r

    light flashes
    smooth surface sparkles blinds
    after-image sizzles

    flash is not lightning
    but blasting wind
    whisking pool clear
    pool mirrors lamp light
    magnifying dazzle

    Lynne Craig, Terrell, TX  USA
    COMMENT:  Nice visual effect upon the page.
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    A Sunflower's Story

    A seed was planted in the ground
    It sprouted without sight or sound
    Slowly roots began to form
    And even as the ground grew warm
    The growth shot upward toward the sun
    Its grand finale not yet begun
    The stem grew green and strong and straight
    Leaves unfurled at a startling rate
    As raindrops fell or morning dew
    Moisture fed the growth rate too
    Soon a head was seen on top
    The petals formed but did not stop
    Until a flower had grown there
    Making people pause and stare
    As Spring and Summer fled toward Fall
    The flower stood so proud and tall
    With yellow petals, framing black
    Tasty seeds hid in the back
    Until one day it bowed its head
    Gave up its seeds for it was dead
    Birds feasted on the sunflower seeds
    A cycle fulfilling nature's needs

    Shelley Culver, Benton, KS, USA
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    Anything Goes

    With grandchildren anything goes
    With grandchildren anything goes

    Sadie raised her brood of six by a strict set of rules
    With grandchildren anything goes
    She allowed absolutely no jumping on bed or couch
    With grandchildren anything goes
    They turn furniture into trampolines, tents and tree-houses
    With grandchildren anything goes

    As a mom no dessert appeared until all veggies were eaten
    With grandchildren anything goes
    One bite of spinach earns a bowl of hot peach cobbler
    With grandchildren anything goes
    No dishwashing duties - there are fireflies to chase
    With grandchildren anything goes

    Bedtime lights out always set for half past ten
    With grandchildren anything goes
    She reads the same stories over and over
    With grandchildren anything goes
    Before last kiss she guides them out to stargaze
    With grandchildren anything goes

    Kay Lay Earnest, Smyrna, GA, USA
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    After a Walk in Swampy Woods

    When we returned home, I lay down in grass
    beneath bare branches of a peach tree.
    It was rare that no one cared, so I pressed
    my cheek against the lawn and longed to sleep;
    the sun warmed the grass, bare branches, and me.

    A scatter of geese flew over, and I ached
    for migrating flocks of legend; with my eyes closed
    I imagined these were flying point, and the skein
    was close behind – though I knew the few
    lived on a pond at the edge of Foster's field.
    I drifted into reverie,
    no longer holding reins or schedules or secrets
    for others; no longer a mom, but a bird --
    a goose perhaps, but a bird nonetheless. I dreamed
    of flying up, past the peach tree, the oak,
    even past the sycamore with her bare, white arms reaching
    to pull me back. I lifted higher, cleared her fingertips.
    Sun-cradled, filled, and bathed in a golden stream, I flew!

    I opened my eyes to a line of tiny ants
    climbing over blades of grass by my nose.
    They accepted me, and I accepted them.
    And I held my breath against footsteps.

    Avonne Griffin, Greer, SC, USA
    COMMENT:  This poet makes the point that we create our own mythology, reaching past this illusion that we call life into another world created by our thoughts.  It is real?  Is it imagination?  Nicely done and very thoughtful piece.
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    Twice Birthed

    My sins lie heavy here upon my bed;
    a beadsman fingers through the sacred orbs
    and someone comes to tend my brow, absorbs
    the last of toil's release to cool the dead.
    The cold creeps up my legs and past my waist,
    my waist, now tiny as when I was young
    and I can feel the numbness flood in haste
    around a lobe where breath escapes one lung.
    I close my eyes and see a tunnel's mouth
    and at the end, a glimmer of white lights.
    I see my mother there, to take me home.
    She claims my soul from earth's long weary drought
    to give to me another birth with rights.
    She signs my name in Book of Saints great tome.

    Yvonne Byrd Nunn, Hermleigh, TX, USA
    POET'S NOTE:  This is an Italian Sonnet.
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    Stately Sentry

    Awake at night, I hear your chimes
    alone no more, a sentry stands
    to keep me safe from heinous crimes.

    You speak the hour, your voice commands,
    at mid of night, still time to sleep,
    to minutes point with able hands.

    A face aglow -- moon dial keeps
    all facets of the lunar scape,
    and when the tides rise, fall and weep.

    Pendulum swings, through glass to gape
    and watch, the night's dark secrets, tell
    should terror strike, a city raped.

    Into the light of dawn you quell
    all fear -- your tone so gentle, sweet.
    The fleeting hours ring like a bell.

    With grace, each hour you patient greet,
    no arrogance, no crass conceit.

    Jeanette Oestermyer, Roswell, NM, USA
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    I Give My Love

    I give my love freely to you
    for all the special things you do.
    Our hearts sing like a symphony,
    stringed musical instruments in harmony,
    playing melodically on cue.

    Let’s fly like newborn birdies do,
    traveling blind without a clue
    in a wind blowing carelessly.

    Our secret laughter always new
    shines like warm sun in skies of blue.
    Our joyful hearts beat fleetingly,
    today until eternity,
    devoted lovers; always true.
    I give my love.

    Eileen Sateriale, Bowie, MD, USA
    COMMENT:  Sweetly written, a love song not just to a lover, but to the universe.
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    Austerity

    The shutter clicks
    just as the sun breaks
    and in the flash
    dewdrops mimic stars.
    A subtle shift in molecules
    silhouettes the scene, haze submits
    to an ocher fire.  I freeze
    and capture it
    before shadows cast my path.
    Disregarding familiar trails,
    I walk a field of thistle--dried gray
    and spilling seed.  A final stretch
    of lichened pebbles
    leads to the lake, I separate
    a whorl of algae--lilies lie
    just beyond my reach--
    wade waist deep, not to gather…
    simply to inhale.

    Judith Schiele, Brandon, MS, USA
    POET'S NOTE:  In the language of flowers, a lily represents return of happiness.
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    Song of Life

    Never had I seen an Easter
    where nature so seemed to mock the spirit of the day.
    The rain continued through the morning,
    the sky gray as death,
    my mood growing even darker.

    Then a note sounded from the front yard,
    a single chirp, repeated over and over,
    as if waiting for me to answer.
    I peered out--my eyes followed the call
    to the water-decked shrub outside--

    and there among the glowing green of the leaves,
    not ten feet from me,
    only the glass between us,
    sat a crimson cardinal beautiful as light,
    chirping and chirping in the rain.

    He looked at me,
    called out again and again,
    then at last flew away into the gloom.
    But he left behind him
    the spirit of Easter revived.

    Katherine Swarts, Houston, TX, USA
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    Someone Made A Choice

    at her birthday party
    they sat the new baby on her lap
    look grandma five generations
    can you believe you've come this far
    the cake they made was good
    but not as good as hers
    a pleasant day before the cold came back
    the worst of all the colds she'd had
    the bed grew hard in the corner of the house
    where she was always the honored guest
    her bones ached
    the food lost its taste
    she moaned and pushed the spoon away
    someone made a choice
    in a twilight sleep
    she heard the comings and goings
    they often talked of her
    how hard it was for them
    no one offered food or drink
    never wanted to be a burden someone said
    someone watched a ticking clock
    someone marked the days
    in the corner of a room she lingered
    a guest whose welcome had worn out

    Anna Wilke, Conroe, TX, USA
    COMMENT:  Well described without descending into pathos or sentimentality, a difficult task with this type of topic.  Nicely done.
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    MARCH: HIBERNATION (BLANK VERSE)
    JUDGES:  CRAIG TIGERMAN, DIANE M. DAVIS, 
    MARY BURLINGAME, MARY MARGARET CARLISLE

    FIRST PLACE - Winner of a $10.00 electronic book gift certificate.

    Pause

    Thin flames of mist rise bloodless, stark between
    dark inert trees where silence silts in wells
    and settles on the shadow-soaked terrain.
    While torpor spreads, subverts the meager soil,
    small beasts curl under layers of decay;
    immobile loops of claw and paw wound tight,
    interred by change, chilled by an unseen sun.
    As frost draws ragged razors through raw air,
    so feral coils slip anchor, set to sail
    the drowsy rhythmic tide of earth’s dull pulse.
    Adrift, like breath exhaled, they float upon
    a spectral sea of life deferred; beyond
    grey sleep’s low headland, free, immersed in dreams
    awash with sultry memories of spring.

    Phill Doran, Johannesburg, RSA

    COMMENT:  Wonderfully written poem allows the reader a peephole into the den of "small beasts" where their winter life is revealed in intimate detail.  Lovely word choice, particular and precise.   Superb in so many ways: diction, economy of words, the alliteration in "As frost draws ragged razors...", and the pun/double-entendre of the one-word title.  Bravo!  Wonderful internal and external rhymes as well as near-rhymes make this a delight to read aloud as well as to read silently. Senusual and earthy, this is a stellar write.
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    SECOND PLACE
    Seer of Seers

    My mama said when I was just a kit
    Dear Phil, it is better to be groundhogs
    Than our porcine distant cousins for
    Although the children never think of us
    When naming toes or reading stories told
    About the types of houses that we build
    We don't end up on breakfast tables as
    A sizzling sausage - bacon served with eggs
    Or grandpa's crackling bread with buttermilk.
    Instead we’re honored right along with Hearts,
    The first George W. and Honest Abe.
    For people look to us as Seer of Seers
    And trust our seasonal predictions more
    Than almanacs and weather satellites.
    It's not so bad to have our comatose
    Hibernation interrupted to trot
    Us out prognosticating hoping we
    Will ham it up before the cameras
    Then returning to our restful snooze
    Let’s count our lucky stars for evolution.

    Lois Lay Castiglioni, Galveston, TX, USA

    COMMENT: Social commentary written in a light and deft way that gives the reader something to "chew" on long after the poem has been read.  Memorable yet light-hearted.  Puts the reader right in the kitchen across the table from the narrator.  Good use of humor and light-heartedness; novel approach, hearing from Punxatawny Phil in first-person!
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    THIRD PLACE - TIE

    The Lady and the Snake

    The first crocus transformation brings
    Lee tugging dormant plants from basement sleep.
    She finds a three foot snakeskin black as pitch.
    It circled gently round clay pots until
    She stopped and shuddered feeling crawling skin.
    For she was harboring her dreaded enemy
    Below her bedroom where she cuddled warm
    Beneath down quilts with Burpee catalogues
    While planting seeds in mental beds for spring.
    Lee sees the skin a gift to understand,
    Her foolish phobia evaporates.
    She realizes hibernating joined
    The lady and the snake in lifelong bonds.
    As wintry winds whipped around the house
    The summer promises the two will meet.
    Again, he'll slither throught her gardens,
    She will not run or hide, but whisper calm
    Extending him a fall invitation
    To sleep through next winter sheltered inside.

    Kay Lay Earnest, Smyrna, GA, USA
    COMMENT:  Nice scene.  Beautifully described.  Interesting use of topic, melding the current winter's hibernation with an age-old enmity.
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    THIRD PLACE - TIE

    Barely There

    Before it's spring, they sleep beneath the snow;
    the two subsist in one soft ball of fur
    with dimpled eyes, and noses that won't twitch
    until they sniff and stretch their sturdy legs.

    The world, a gray and granite cave of grace
    that fosters dreams until young faith is sight,
    will keep the cold a distant, howling song
    that only serves to lull a quickened heart.

    A warm and quiet mountain, temporal love,
    will sleep between the ball of fur and harm,
    then lead her cubs into a world of light
    where berries, black and juicy, fill the woods.

    The daystar rises slowly in the east;
    each morning shadows feed a warmer climb.

    Avonne Griffin, Greer, SC, USA
    COMMENT:  Beautiful scene, as if cut directly from the fabric of the wilderness.  Nice pun in the title and the final word; excellent for younger readers, for it's so easy to read!  Fine use of form.  Very well done.
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    OTHER POEMS
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    Chicken Snakes

    Inverted igloo carved within the earth
    holds nest of slender bodies twirled, entwined
    this head-to-tail-to-head of sleeping snakes
    wakes not to fear the tool held in his hand

    Awake, they bear him no amount of ill
    yet he, the king of genocide, bears them
    on barbed wire fence posts drying in the sun
    stark testimony to a battle song

    Sung solo -- as they slept, about them slung
    a hoe to head … to head … to head, until all
    were but a bloodied pulp within the lair
    and could he, he would do the deed again

    “Live and let live” … such thoughts he can’t embrace
    From father/son -- to son-- the lesson taught
    while eggs are revenue, alas the snakes
    are but a blight the farmer tries to expunge

    SJ Baldock, Lancaster, TX, USA
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    Bearclaws

    When winter’s coat of snow begins to shed
    And sunbeams run like honey from the sky,
    I lift my head, and sniff the air, and stir.
    The bears are waking – so am I – it’s time
    To blink away the blur of dreams and see
    The buds that climb and open to the air.
    With just such glee as bears emerge from caves,
    My fingers flair from mittens, stretch and curl.
    For something in them craves the kiss of spring –
    The winds that twirl, the sky that rains, the earth
    That seems to sing.  My hands aren’t human hands
    But paws of massive girth that shake the ground.
    They seek the land’s renewal, dig for roots,
    And pound the stumps of last year’s failing trees.
    Yet gentle on the shoots, they touch new life
    The season frees, and turn the mud for more.
    My pruning knife and shears become my claws.
    The sycamore and thimbleberry yield.
    In spring they never pause, but months wind down …
    In autumn’s field, my bear paws seek their rest.

    Elizabeth Barrette, Charleston, IL, USA
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    Morning Hibernation

    Snuggle deep cocoon of softness, sweetness
    Refracted life, a haziness of being
    Push away the outside dig deep, stay deep
    Ignore the light that calls from high above
    Burrow in settle, settle, settle in
    Ignore the birds that call you from outside
    Shift, moan, shift, groan, sink into the bedding
    Coldness waits, high stepping on the hardwood
    The world waits, deadlines, demands, reprimands
    Draw close the comfort, cover, let it wait

    Tiffany Caldwell, Morton, PA, USA
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    This Cave is too Snug

    If I were young again and lithe
    of heart and limb as I was long ago,
    this morning mist would call to me to tramp
    abroad among the trees dew-dripped with chill,
    the fruit of sudden spring-soft rains that dropped
    from leaden skies that hid the struggling sun.

    But now I choose a fire that warms the knees
    and hibernate among the quilts that keep
    away the cold of one more stubborn front -
    to dream of ending winter’s long estate.

    Lynne Craig, Terrell, TX, USA
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    Hibernation Becomes Action’s Buzz

    Like verdure’s peaks of floral greens wine down,
    and bears that sleep through winter’s chill away
    from life of action’s buzz, they drowse for months
    in dormant state and age while resting there.

    The bears grow hungry.  They will covet food.
    The hidden shelter, cave, or lair restricts
    their chow.  When they awake, their appetites
    and belly howls react as famish dearth,

    yet those around supply the bears in grubs
    and eats.  Their season’s nap and rest inflates
    the spasm jerks with brutal pangs from lack
    of food.  Likewise, the mortals want them fed.

    For months they lay quiescent, calm, and still;
    with stomach full, the bears become quid-nunc
    and on the prowl to probe the time they’ve lost.
    Now action’s buzz will help them add new pounds.

    Carol Dee Meeks, Artesia, NM, USA
    ==========
    And With the Dawn

    Night approaches, my eyes heavy with grief,
    my soul weary, divine rest my desire.
    Escape the world into darkness of dusk,
    oblivious to those who hurt, who cry.

    Though I am blessed, yet small in status, weak,
    the need to serve the hopeless lost persists.
    So from the throes of pain I exit now
    in dormancy, asleep through hidden days.

    Within my hibernation, shall I dream,
    where I may see a road that leads me back?
    Sweet peace, lost hope, dear love – greatest of all,
    that tells me to return – this dream is real.

    Then will I rise again to see the dawn,
    the morning sun a lamp of golden light?
    And will I forge my way to strands unknown,
    all earth so bright, a lantern’s fiery glow?

    Jeanette Oestermyer, Roswell, NM, USA
    ========
    Just Like Them

    When days grow shorter and the air grows cool,
    So many creatures go to bed for months.
    But first they stuff themselves to build up strength--
    While autumn skies are still so blue and bright,
    How do these creatures know they must prepare?

    When days are short and nights are biting cold,
    The creatures snuggle in their winter dens;
    There being little left to do outside,
    They only venture forth on scattered days
    Of fleeting warmth beneath a cloudless sky.

    We also share the wish to hibernate,
    We humans who, on frigid winter days,
    Eat rich and filling foods before we sleep
    And snuggle under covers when we wake
    As if we hope no chores will call us forth.

    Katherine Swarts, Houston, TX, USA
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    Hibernation

    We sleep and dream of other days when we
    as heroes fought for life and peace and home;
    now dreams possess our minds and hearts in whole.

    We study not the rug our leaders weave.
    Obsessed by colors bright we don't inspect
    the trueness of the warp and weft cartooned.

    We take the rag straight from the oaken loom
    regardless of the lack of finish shear and wrap
    ourselves in ruddy dreams and hibernate.

    Gary Wade, Seymour, IA, USA
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    EDITORS' CHOICE: THE BEST OF WINTER 
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    Thin flames of mist rise bloodless, stark between
    dark inert trees where silence silts in wells
    and settles on the shadow-soaked terrain.
    While torpor spreads, subverts the meager soil,
    small beasts curl under layers of decay;
    immobile loops of claw and paw wound tight,
    interred by change, chilled by an unseen sun.
    As frost draws ragged razors through raw air,
    so feral coils slip anchor, set to sail
    the drowsy rhythmic tide of earth’s dull pulse.
    Adrift, like breath exhaled, they float upon
    a spectral sea of life deferred; beyond
    grey sleep’s low headland, free, immersed in dreams
    awash with sultry memories of spring.

    Phill Doran, Johannesburg, RSA

    COMMENT:  Wonderfully written poem allows the reader a peephole into the den of "small beasts" where their winter life is revealed in intimate detail.  Lovely word choice, particular and precise.  Superb in so many ways: diction, economy of words, the alliteration in "As frost draws ragged razors...", and the pun/double-entendre of the one-word title.  Bravo!  Wonderful internal and external rhymes as well as near-rhymes make this a delight to read aloud as well as to read silently. Senusual and earthy, this is a stellar write

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