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February 2002 Edition
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FEBRUARY JUDGES
WARNER CONARTON
EILEEN SATERIALE

FEBRUARY SPONSORS
LEO F. WALTZ
MARY MARGARET CARLISLE



PICK A TOPIC - WINTER
Winter creeps along in many forms, and can be glimpsed in the silhouette of a wolf, tracks in the snow, the cry of a crow, or under the snow moon. Each poem is different, but celebrates nature in its many forms.
 
AWARDS
FIRST PLACE - Winner of a $10.00 electronic book gift certificate
Last Night

Did you
hear the crow cry,
see the wolf's silhouette
beneath the snow moon and did you
weep too?

Judith Schiele, Brandon, MS, USA

JUDGES' COMMENTS:  Clever weaving of snow, wolf, and moon into one equal topic.  Tender close.  Succinctly written story of humanity's relationship with the wilderness and wild creatures.  Simply elegant. 
SECOND PLACE - Winner of a copy of "Red Booth Review," 2001 edition, Edited by W.T. Pfefferle. 
An Endless Winter

Silent plains in naked moon
only shadows walk this night
an iron horse in silhouette
its long dark tracks in the snow
man is cold, white as death.
Ancient spirits drift the hills
smokeless fires speak no words
skinless drums and shattered wood
what once was, can be no more
man is cold, white as death. 

James M. Thompson, Baytown, Texas, USA

JUDGES' COMMENTS:  Eerie and penetrating; a different kind of "tracks in the snow" marks the advance of white man's civilization at the expense of spirits, fires and drums.  Excellent!  Memory of the past, written in a way that forces the reader to re-evaluate the possible steps that may have led to this moment.  Carefully chosen words emphasize the ghostly mood of this piece. 
THIRD PLACE - TIE
Anthem

Silver vapors
geyser skyward.
Long slow greetings 
of a killing moon
rise in song.
Sing to me
Dance with me
Hunt by me
In the heart of night
the silhouette of a wolf begins to run.

Ron Blanton, Alpharetta, GA, USA

JUDGES' COMMENTS:  The images and invitation are too appropriate and atavistic to resist. Go outside, shout this poem to the night and wolf spirits would certainly come.  A very moving poem, song, command.
THIRD PLACE - TIE
Helsinki, Last Time

I look out at the frozen sea. The blue-shadowed
record of some creature's crossing is a 
tattooed chain snaking away to the South - 
where it's warm, where
you are, where light is, love is. 
The Old Ones knew to counteract the dark and silence
here by naming names such as Kalastajatorppa and
Gallen-Kalela, names that flow like icy
water over stones, flow like Sibelius' notes -
leaving tracks in the snow.

John E. Rice, Houston, TX, USA 

JUDGES' COMMENTS:  Events artistically unfold as a gallery visit, brilliantly illustrating through metaphors the beauty and dignity and good of this world.  Exquisitely written, with exceptional use of language. 
HONORABLE MENTION
One Crow Sorrow

a single crow cries
sorrow at the creeping dawn
seeking a reply

Betty Dobson, Halifax, NS, Canada 

JUDGES' COMMENTS:  Traditional poem that vividly frames a natural scene. Brief anthem to lonely outdoor morning.  This haiku-like poem uses  alliteration to depict the sound of the crow.
HONORABLE MENTION
Alaskan Winter Night

The land has lain for many weeks untouched by sun,
Lit only by the pale glow of the moon
And the distant fires of the stars
And the phantom dance of aurora lights.
Against this eerie and beautiful curtain,
On the stage of a vast white snowfield,
The silhouette of a wolf raises its head
And the song of the wild carries across the land.

Katherine Swarts, Houston, TX, USA

JUDGES' COMMENTS:  An extravagantly portrayed display of light sets the mood for its song of life.  Nice vignette. Good images. Poem leads us to the wilderness.  A description of a grand and lofty scene with a music in it that lingers, lingers. . .

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False Spring

Pristine
In the evening
On the morrow though
Criss-crossing the landscape
Small tracks in the snow
Snow angels making
Snow angels baking
In the withering glow
Of the eye of
El Sol

SJ Baldock, Lancaster, TX, USA

COMMENTS:  Nicely done.  Crisp language choice.  Meant to be read aloud!  Good use of alliteration.
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The Banquet

In my dream a wedding banquet's almost set--
the bride and her maidens, attired in white
with scarlet accents, enter as I, a woman
of a certain age, fuss over flowers, purple and gold.
"My table," says the bride, "represents the seasons.
You're arranging autumn"--pointing to a cake
with dancing scarecrows"--and down at that end--
where the crow stalks and hoarsely cries--
that's winter--where you'll be going next."

SuzAnne C. Cole, Houston, TX, USA

COMMENTS:  Haunting and well-written.  An entire novel in a brief paragraph.  A full gambit of carefully sculptured symbols lead to a finale if not totally understood, hesitantly accepted.  Heavy duty!  An interesting dream of death with a wedding used as a passage.
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Draught

His eyes mirroring defeat sweep across
Stunted corn stalks shivering in long rows
Skeleton fingers of bare trees
Scratch the crimson sunset
Stark reality of foreclosure drains his will
Silence is broken by the lonely
Cry of a crow

Kay Lay Earnest, Smyrna, GA, USA

COMMENTS:  Presents a striking image of the barest season to accent the most poignant of human emotions -- loss.  An awful moment, poetically well-described; alliteration abounds.
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Maiden Moon

Lit
Window
Shaded bed
Silver spackle
Face in a dark sky
Her halo is forming
Round the corners of our sleep
Frozen pitch I nestle under
Straining for a sign of life from an
Alabastrine Platter on black table

Lisa Andrea Gayle, Calgary, Alberta, Canada

COMMENTS:  Comments: A journey of imagination gains momentum as a syllable is added to each line.  Deftly handled.
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The Crow

The crow on the power-line outside my bedroom window,
seems to know when I should not be sleeping,
for it is his relentless squawk that ceases sweet slumber; I peer through sleepy eyes, out the window, at the crow; he peers back, with beady black eyes of mirth, and looks away, indifferent;  Before taking flight, his mission complete, the cry of the crow will be-screech my ears again;  this time I just shake my head and wonder who he thinks he is, waking people up, that cocky crow.

Tanya Larson, Kamloops, BC, Canada

COMMENTS:  Good description of the annoyance of a crow.  Mystical and humorous, catching a fine moment and properly-weird relationship.
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Paw prints

With all his three years old might,
he stomped his tiny boots,
embedded deeply, in the heart of the snow.
Then, he looked behind to admire and compliment,
what he referred to as, - paw prints.
"Oh no, they're foot prints," I tried to correct.
But who am I, to ague with the wild, innocent,
imaginative mind and spirit of a child.
Tracks in the snow, be it of man or beast.
confirms, that winter is for fun, not only hibernation.

Alma Philbert Linton, LaSalle, Quebec, Canada

COMMENTS:  Slice of life.  Fun, indeed!
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To the School Bus

Bundled against the chill,
a boy trudges through snow,
leaves tracks which I follow
with my motherly eyes.
"I want to walk alone,"
he says, and I agree.
In that moment I feel,
joy and grief intertwined.
He's left me already;
I'm the one who's alone.

Terrie Relf, San Diego, CA, USA

COMMENTS:  An emotion well captured and passed along after great vivid, familiar imagery.  Classic scenario of a parent letting go.  Universal portrait of the parent/child relationship.
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Snow Moon

Clouds float in stupor demure,
A moon's careless dreams in white,
All except one in angelic vision,
Floating still on sky space rented.
Angels in heaven silent in watch,
A lonely cloud, pained in rain,
A teardrop in slide on rainbow wishes,
Parched minds and souls in wait,
Snow moon in shadows undressed,
As depths of truth ripple in mist.

Prakash Rangarajan, Coimbatore, Tamilnadu, India

COMMENTS:  The last few lines of this piece have such an unreal beauty, and are so well-written they could easily form a poem on their own.
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Simplicity

Winters heart has risen far
Writhing within heats lost aroma
Smile, Snow Moon, as you withdraw,
Wish for me an episode of solstice.
Filter thoughts through my emotions,
Time them there to coincide with pleasure,
Leave me without worry, tears or hunger,
Tease my senses with spring imagined,
Kiss my soul with tempest fragile.
Smile upon me, Snow Moon, smile.

Barbara G. Scroggins, Williston, VT, USA

COMMENTS:  Nice pleading poem of man and nature. Title well-suited to the poem.  Interesting placement of the lines brings emphasis to this request for "pleasure."
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Sunday Winter Morning Silence

We sit in Sunday winter morning silence
In the month of the raccoon moon,
You and I at opposite ends of the couch
Cradling each our thoughts and first cup of coffee,
Our toes and minds entwined
Beneath one fuzzy blanket.
This peace, of which we've years-long dreamed,
Becomes our mantle in this warm, old house
New home to us amid this stately stand of snow-flocked pine,
Quite undisturbed by one raucous cry of a crow.

Gary Wade, Williston, VT, USA

COMMENTS:  Creatively illustrates harmony between humanity and the world.  Eloquent in its expression of the peace and love shared by two who have worked to attain this moment.  Lovely writing.

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THROES OF LOVE

We asked that poets tell of a less than happy Valentine's Day.  While each of these poems was written in a different perspective, some seem to be from that oddball place where only laughing poets seem to wander!
 

AWARDS
FIRST PLACE - Winner of a $10.00 electronic book gift certificate.
Red Rose

Red rose
Valentine gift
Treasured keepsake
Symbolic of our love
Pressed flat

Betty Dobson, Halifax, NS, Canada

Good ending. A mushy ending was expected, but this ends as abruptly as the Valentine's Day experience.  Almost a haiku in its effect, bringing the reader back to ascertain the REAL meaning of that last line.
SECOND PLACE - Winner of a box of chocolate.
When I See Red

He chose 14th of February to announce he was leaving me
Making my heart feel as empty as cicada shells on a tree
Now I rejoice the cad left with each Valentine I see

Kay Lay Earnest, Smyrna, GA, USA

JUDGES' COMMENTS:   Original metaphor.  Good sense of humor. The poem flows.  Red refers to anger and valentine. This is an on-topic triplet of a less than happy valentines day.  Nice word choice.
THIRD PLACE - Winner of a box of chocolate.
My True Love

He gave me a funny card,
A "valentine for a friend," he said.
As he drove off, I saw them,
Red roses in the back seat.

Katherine Swarts, Houston, TX, USA

JUDGES' COMMENTS:  An irony that Valentine's Day can be humorous or serious. The poet learns that the lover has another.  Sometimes a few choice lines can tell a long complex story. 
HONORABLE MENTION 
Blind Date

"They look
great together,"
they all said as we danced.
Then the heel of her shoe caught in
my pants!

John E. Rice, Houston, Texas

JUDGES' COMMENTS:  Memorable!  Title fits the poem. Humorous ending. Nice "sound" rhyme in "danced" and "pants."  Freezes a weird situation in the mind's eye.  Difficult to forget.

OTHER ENTRIES COMMENTED UPON BY OUR JUDGES OR EDITORS
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Pull my finger, Valentine ...

It was silent, but deadly, and
I knew if he asked I would marry him
For trying not to embarrass me as
He gagged and began turning green

SJ Baldock, Lancaster TX, USA

COMMENTS:  On the one hand, this piece is almost totally mystifying, but then again, it certainly paints a vivid picture!  It's up to each reader to guess what happened here!
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Sr. Citizen

When the old guy stopped bringing me a Valentine
His snub and change of heart suited me just fine
The only tears I've shed are the artificial kind

Lois Lay Castiglioni, Galveston, TX, USA

COMMENTS:  Good rhyme and a nice flow. Humorous telling of a universal experience.  Sad, but true, that some expressions of love seem to "dry-up" over time.
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A Rare Gift

My love's
Valentine gift--
a belly-button light.
Whose "innie" confused with my rare
"outie"?

SuzAnne C. Cole, Houston, TX, USA

COMMENTS:  On topic telling of oddball gift.  Who could have ever guessed this type of intimate device existed, and that a poet would memorialize it in words!
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Left in the Oven

baking
edible hearts
just for my valentine
then he surprised me, home early -
burning

Deborah P. Kolodji, Temple City, CA, USA

COMMENTS:  Bring on the fire extinguisher, and air out the house!  Perfect form, simple but elegant word choices to bring the reader right into this darkly humorous picture.
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My Oddest Valentine

I opened the door expecting chocolates and a single rose
to my horror stood a gigantic cupid spouting songs and prose
My love looked so ridiculous curtseying on his tippy toes

Tanya Larson, Kamloops, BC, Canada

COMMENTS:  Good rhyme, on topic.  Vivid image of the expected and the surprisingly unexpected.  Downright silly, but great fun!  If readers don't get a good laugh from this, their funny bones need tweaking.
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What Goes Around, Comes Around

Being treated like the ugly duckling
Once spurned, he went away, dejected.
Only to return later as prince charming
And dumped me, like a hot potato - burning.

Alma Philbert Linton, LaSalle, Quebec, Canada

COMMENTS:  Ah, the universal "pay-back is heck" story, told in an ironic direct fashion.  Been there, done both sides of that one.  Nicely done.
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Fire and Ice

"Be my Valentine! Let me take you to the moon!" he crooned,
I was his "all," his "everything" through June.
Now in snow and ice he whistles, blithely, someone else's tune.

Barbara G. Scroggins, Williston, VT, USA.

COMMENTS:  Starts off in gushy greeting card manner, but ends up in divorce court.  Quite a twisty treat!  Nice writing.
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Brass Love

College band bus merrily bouncing.
College freshman cavorting brazenly.
Off flies his cap, in two breaks her pencil,
True love encountered en route to Valentine’s concert.

Marsha Steed, Roseville, CA, USA

POET'S NOTE:  My parents' story is that they met on Feb 14, 1954 on a college band tour.
COMMENTS:  A light-hearted paean to love.
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A Rose

I thought
so delicate
as I touched a rosebud
you flew, a dandelion seed
in wind.

James M. Thompson, Baytown, TX, USA

COMMENTS:  Very funny telling of two people not on the same wavelength.  Touching. Nice words. Lingering effect.

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WINTER GARDEN


AWARDS
FIRST PLACE - Winner of a packet of dill seeds. 
under gnarled tree roots
beneath soft winter blankets
toads remember spring

John E. Rice, Houston, TX, USA

POET'S COMMENT:  "Thanks.  A packet of dill will fill the bill."
JUDGES' COMMENTS:  The unexpected final line. The outlandishness of it.  Yes, but perfect.  Nature can't wait to hop out. Good contrast with the tree roots and the winter blanket.   Captures the essence of late winter simply and beautifully.  Exquisite word choice.  Succinct, excellent.  Complete story in three brief lines.
SECOND PLACE - Winner of a packet of zucchini seeds. 
snowflake falling on
lily of the valley bloom
white on white in white

SJ Baldock, Lancaster, TX, USA

JUDGE'S COMMENTS:  Snow bright!  Great imagery.  End of winter nature scenario brings the reader into the scene.  Strong, elegant, almost
sacred natural winter scene.  Wonderful ending line. 
THIRD PLACE - Winner of a packet of garlic chives seeds.
red crocus
peeping through snow
winter's end

Kay Lay Earnest, Smyrna, GA, USA

JUDGES' COMMENTS:  Spectacular image centers around a single, glorious blossom.  With this Haiku, we see the end of one season and the beginning of the next in a tentative red push up through the snow.
HONORABLE MENTION
first to arrive
yellow-hatted 
dandelion 

Lois Lay Castiglioni, Galveston, TX, USA

JUDGES' COMMENTS:  Piquant, with a lively charm.  A nice picture.  Simple, strong, clearly portrayed.  Memorable. 
HONORABLE MENTION
clouds and fog mist
outline dead stalks and leaves
one red bloom

Katherine Swarts, Houston, TX, USA

JUDGES' COMMENTS:  Well written hint of anticipated spring. Red bloom is a mysterious image that leaves an after-image. 

OTHER ENTRIES COMMENTED UPON BY OUR JUDGES OR EDITORS
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Furrowed rows of snow
portend the tiller's journey
bent stakes pray for spring

Ron Blanton, Alpharetta, GA, USA

COMMENTS:  Not fully nature-oriented, man's hand sneaks into this thoughtful, mood-provoking piece.
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two bare sycamores
crooked white branches angling
in the empty air

SuzAnne C. Cole, Houston, TX, USA

COMMENTS:  Poet depicts a chilling winter garden with vivid language.  Typical winter scene made unique by wonderful wording and exceptional phrasing.
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under dead wood fern
a ladybug shivering
on a curled shoot

Elaine Gentry, Houston, TX, USA

COMMENTS:  The duality of "above" and "below" are neatly tucked into this natural winter setting.
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Snow-ghostly seedlings
in muzzy coffin of earth
labor for rebirth

Maryann Hazen-Stearns, Ellenville, NY, USA

COMMENTS:  Portrait of a pungent rural setting.  Lovely particular language, well suited for Haiku.
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confused spring bulbs
sprout then freeze
western climate’s trickery

Marsha Steed, Roseville, CA, USA

COMMENTS:  A scenario gardeners can relate to. The word-use of "confusion" at the beginning and "trickery" at end parallels the flip-flopping of the seasons.
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green strawberries
waiting to redden in spring
winter’s dessert

Marsha Steed, Roseville, CA, USA

COMMENTS:  Smile-making and hopeful.  Very different contrast of colors and seasons.  Luscious sounding.
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morning sunlight shows
cold periwinkle spires
silver dripping glow

Craig Soderquist, Universal City, TX, USA

COMMENTS:  Chillingly beautiful. Brimming with imagery.  Gorgeous scene. Clipped pace well suited to this quick picture.

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IT'S JUST TWO, TOO, TO, MY DEAR

Some poets used our three chosen words as a writing exercise.  But others took the opportunity to allow a quirky sense of humor full reign, or let imagination soar into unexpected places.  We are glad they did.
 

AWARDS
FIRST PLACE - Winner of an electronic $10.00 Book Gift Certificate
Twilight

When it grows too dim
To tell flowers from the weeds
I turn towards home wondering why
He chose not to weed me from his life
After fifty-two years as his wife
Since he is better cook and bookkeeper
While I excel in talking on the phone
And watching teary TV shows
He overlooks my faults
For some reason only heaven knows

Kay Lay Earnest, Smyrna, GA, USA

JUDGES' COMMENTS:  Sweet, reflective poem.  Nice job weaving elements of nature into the poem.  Gentle reflection on married life.  This poet made excellent use of the "assigned" three words, without putting too much emphasis upon their presence.  A thoughtful poem here that draws the reader back to rejoin beginning with end, and middle with both, to make it extra special. This one is a keeper. 
SECOND PLACE
Indigestion

Et two, Brewtay?
More like four, I'll bet, with
blue onions, too - you know,
allium gallium and all that
ancient Roman food and 
stuff. Sid Seizure once spoke
eloquently about that to
a hungry Nation.
Et tu? Pizza
in tres partes divisus?

John E. Rice, Houston, TX, USA

JUDGES' COMMENTS:  Requires study (with tongue in cheek.) A thoughtful unconjuncture... fun.  Great voice. Mentioning the foods that bring on indigestion is a great touch. Sid Seizure is a reference to the King of television's golden age, Sid Caesar.  Nice job!  Bright and whimsical language accentuate a vivid scene.
THIRD PLACE
Sophie's Dream

She may simply be sleepy
lulled by the soft whicker and whir
of wings on the breeze.
Too comfortable to stir
under the beetle-clicking July sun.
Feet twitch, a tail wag and yip
mark a joyful dream pursuit;
rush of wind ruffled fur,
the clasp of teeth on a crumpled Frisbee,
a two-handed back scratch and pat.

Maryann Hazen-Stearns, Ellenville, NY, USA

JUDGES' COMMENTS:  Perhaps it is a generalization to say that all poets are dog-lovers. Perhaps not. Yet, such a treasurable moment with mood restored deserves praise.  Not a word extra or astray. Vivid.  An observer wonders of the slumber of a dog.  Excellent word choice for a nice portrait.  An illustration of simple moments and pleasure -- yet written with zest and flavor. 
HONORABLE MENTION
E tu?

Too many
Lies 
To stay
Two

SJ Baldock, Lancaster, TX, USA

JUDGES' COMMENTS:  Six words, four brief lines -- understandable, succinct and to the point.  Alliterative.  Literate.  Excellent!

OTHER ENTRIES COMMENTED UPON BY OUR JUDGES OR EDITORS
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Toddler Trip

Today we took
Our two year old
To town to see the zoo
She loved the tawny tigers
And they seem to like her too

Lois Lay Castiglioni, Galveston, TX, USA

COMMENTS:  Brings back memories of a trip to the zoo with a small child. This will be a great keepsake for the child. Nice Alliteration!
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Sins of the Flesh

"It's just too delicious, my dear,"
she said, bending close to my ear.
"I hear she had two at once last night;
can you just imagine her delight?
If I cared as little for opinion as she;
I'd also eat my weight in baked brie."

SuzAnne C. Cole, Houston, TX, USA

COMMENTS:  Gets better the more often it's read. Such perky rhyming, nor too subtle its implication.  A toot.  Humorous poem about two cavalier lovers. Very appropriate title.  Delightful structure and form focuses on humor.
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For Words

You're just Too marvelous
to be Two of you
and; so I sing of love
To my Dear and only, True

Louie Levy, Thousand Oaks, CA, USA

COMMENTS:  Greeting card or valentine for an expectant mother!  Strong and concise, emphasizing rhythm and rhyme.  Depends on cliché in an unexpected way. . .nicely done.
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The Numbers Game

I'm in serious pain here.
"Too bad", you said. "I'll call you in two days."
As if "two" is some mystical number...
I've always preferred odd numbers to even,
so I turn to your page in my phone book,
where rows of seven numbers each beckon.
I dial your home, your office, your cell.
Still no answer.
I turn to another page in my book;
those numbers worked like a charm.

Terrie Relf, San Diego, CA, USA

COMMENTS:  A jigsaw poem, the parts needing fitted together to illustrate content full picture and closure. A chuckle here. Maybe two or three.  The poet builds a conflict then decides to call someone else and is happy with the results. Good ending.
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Two Too Many To Do

Two too many to do. He looked at the computer,
With the list of the day and its duties and Do-Fors.
Ten things here; can do eight in the time set for working.
Still he rolled up his sleeves and dove in without shirking.
Someone asked, "By the way, can you help get this typed up?"
"And you know, this needs sorting," another one piped up.
Every hour that he worked, someone else was there asking,
"Can you help get this done?" It got more and more tasking,
Till he threw up his hands; in frustration he thundered,
"Two too many to do? No, it’s more like two hundred!"

Katherine Swarts, Houston, TX, USA

COMMENTS:  Interesting combination of rhyming couplets with a prose poem. Appropriate to today's hustle-bustle world.
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A Sweater

Knit one, purl two.
Needles flying quickly like a falcon.
A cable here and there,
Should I use one bobble or two?
To the yarn store I need to go,
Panic sets in,
I'm out of supplies!
Would you like to come with me, too?

Venus Tadrzak, Lakewood, OH, USA

COMMENTS:  This is a knitter's dilemma. Good process poem takes the reader directly into the action by using the jargon of the craft.

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BEST POEM OF FEBRUARY - From the Pick a Topic Competition

There is no immediate prize associated with a poem having been picked as the Best Poem of a particular month, only the knowledge that our editors picked it over all the other prize winners of that month.  However, all poems chosen for BEST POEM of each month in the year 2002 will be automatically entered in the BEST POEM OF THE YEAR 2002 competition, voted on by Sol Magazine Members at the end of the year.  The winners of that contest will be awarded prizes and will be invited to enter Sol Magazine's Poet Laureate 2003 Competition.
 

Last Night

Did you
hear the crow cry,
see the wolf's silhouette
beneath the snow moon and did you
weep too?

Judith Schiele, Brandon, MS, USA

JUDGES' COMMENTS:  This Cinquain has a carefully measured, haunting quality with a thought-provoking, surprise ending.  Great writing. The poet takes us to a frightening night in the wilderness.  Sticks to the rules of the original Cinquain, capturing a powerful image and build towards a surprising climax, and, as is common in the Cinquain, the first and last lines have two strongly accented syllables.  Visual, audio, kinesthetic aplenty crowded into a nineteen word sentence. Stark and voluble combined.



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Note: We choose poets for our interviews from among our membership.  On occasion we consider other poets from recommendations we receive from other editors.  Please do not send us poetry unless it is in response to an open competition posted to our website or in one of our newsletters.  Our editors do not accept poetry or articles on speculation.


All poetry remains the property of the poet, except Sol Magazine reserves the right to publish all poems (once) at a future date, and/or to post them to a web page.  NONE may be reproduced without permission of Sol Magazine.  Electronic forwarding is permitted as long as no portion of this magazine is changed and all credits are given.

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