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FEBRUARY JUDGES
WARNER CONARTON
EILEEN SATERIALE
FEBRUARY SPONSORS
LEO F. WALTZ
MARY MARGARET CARLISLE
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FIRST PLACE - Winner of a $10.00 electronic book gift certificate
Last NightJUDGES' COMMENTS: Clever weaving of snow, wolf, and moon into one equal topic. Tender close. Succinctly written story of humanity's relationship with the wilderness and wild creatures. Simply elegant. |
SECOND PLACE - Winner of a copy of "Red Booth Review," 2001
edition, Edited by W.T. Pfefferle.
An Endless WinterJUDGES' COMMENTS: Eerie and penetrating; a different kind of "tracks in the snow" marks the advance of white man's civilization at the expense of spirits, fires and drums. Excellent! Memory of the past, written in a way that forces the reader to re-evaluate the possible steps that may have led to this moment. Carefully chosen words emphasize the ghostly mood of this piece. |
THIRD PLACE - TIE
AnthemJUDGES' COMMENTS: The images and invitation are too appropriate and atavistic to resist. Go outside, shout this poem to the night and wolf spirits would certainly come. A very moving poem, song, command. |
THIRD PLACE - TIE
Helsinki, Last TimeJUDGES' COMMENTS: Events artistically unfold as a gallery visit, brilliantly illustrating through metaphors the beauty and dignity and good of this world. Exquisitely written, with exceptional use of language. |
HONORABLE MENTION
One Crow SorrowJUDGES' COMMENTS: Traditional poem that vividly frames a natural scene. Brief anthem to lonely outdoor morning. This haiku-like poem uses alliteration to depict the sound of the crow. |
HONORABLE MENTION
Alaskan Winter NightJUDGES' COMMENTS: An extravagantly portrayed display of light sets the mood for its song of life. Nice vignette. Good images. Poem leads us to the wilderness. A description of a grand and lofty scene with a music in it that lingers, lingers. . . |
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False SpringCOMMENTS: Nicely done. Crisp language choice. Meant to be read aloud! Good use of alliteration.Pristine
In the evening
On the morrow though
Criss-crossing the landscape
Small tracks in the snow
Snow angels making
Snow angels baking
In the withering glow
Of the eye of
El SolSJ Baldock, Lancaster, TX, USA
The BanquetCOMMENTS: Haunting and well-written. An entire novel in a brief paragraph. A full gambit of carefully sculptured symbols lead to a finale if not totally understood, hesitantly accepted. Heavy duty! An interesting dream of death with a wedding used as a passage.In my dream a wedding banquet's almost set--
the bride and her maidens, attired in white
with scarlet accents, enter as I, a woman
of a certain age, fuss over flowers, purple and gold.
"My table," says the bride, "represents the seasons.
You're arranging autumn"--pointing to a cake
with dancing scarecrows"--and down at that end--
where the crow stalks and hoarsely cries--
that's winter--where you'll be going next."SuzAnne C. Cole, Houston, TX, USA
DraughtCOMMENTS: Presents a striking image of the barest season to accent the most poignant of human emotions -- loss. An awful moment, poetically well-described; alliteration abounds.His eyes mirroring defeat sweep across
Stunted corn stalks shivering in long rows
Skeleton fingers of bare trees
Scratch the crimson sunset
Stark reality of foreclosure drains his will
Silence is broken by the lonely
Cry of a crowKay Lay Earnest, Smyrna, GA, USA
Maiden MoonCOMMENTS: Comments: A journey of imagination gains momentum as a syllable is added to each line. Deftly handled.Lit
Window
Shaded bed
Silver spackle
Face in a dark sky
Her halo is forming
Round the corners of our sleep
Frozen pitch I nestle under
Straining for a sign of life from an
Alabastrine Platter on black tableLisa Andrea Gayle, Calgary, Alberta, Canada
The CrowCOMMENTS: Good description of the annoyance of a crow. Mystical and humorous, catching a fine moment and properly-weird relationship.The crow on the power-line outside my bedroom window,
seems to know when I should not be sleeping,
for it is his relentless squawk that ceases sweet slumber; I peer through sleepy eyes, out the window, at the crow; he peers back, with beady black eyes of mirth, and looks away, indifferent; Before taking flight, his mission complete, the cry of the crow will be-screech my ears again; this time I just shake my head and wonder who he thinks he is, waking people up, that cocky crow.Tanya Larson, Kamloops, BC, Canada
Paw printsCOMMENTS: Slice of life. Fun, indeed!With all his three years old might,
he stomped his tiny boots,
embedded deeply, in the heart of the snow.
Then, he looked behind to admire and compliment,
what he referred to as, - paw prints.
"Oh no, they're foot prints," I tried to correct.
But who am I, to ague with the wild, innocent,
imaginative mind and spirit of a child.
Tracks in the snow, be it of man or beast.
confirms, that winter is for fun, not only hibernation.Alma Philbert Linton, LaSalle, Quebec, Canada
To the School BusCOMMENTS: An emotion well captured and passed along after great vivid, familiar imagery. Classic scenario of a parent letting go. Universal portrait of the parent/child relationship.Bundled against the chill,
a boy trudges through snow,
leaves tracks which I follow
with my motherly eyes.
"I want to walk alone,"
he says, and I agree.
In that moment I feel,
joy and grief intertwined.
He's left me already;
I'm the one who's alone.Terrie Relf, San Diego, CA, USA
Snow MoonCOMMENTS: The last few lines of this piece have such an unreal beauty, and are so well-written they could easily form a poem on their own.Clouds float in stupor demure,
A moon's careless dreams in white,
All except one in angelic vision,
Floating still on sky space rented.
Angels in heaven silent in watch,
A lonely cloud, pained in rain,
A teardrop in slide on rainbow wishes,
Parched minds and souls in wait,
Snow moon in shadows undressed,
As depths of truth ripple in mist.Prakash Rangarajan, Coimbatore, Tamilnadu, India
SimplicityCOMMENTS: Nice pleading poem of man and nature. Title well-suited to the poem. Interesting placement of the lines brings emphasis to this request for "pleasure."Winters heart has risen far
Writhing within heats lost aroma
Smile, Snow Moon, as you withdraw,
Wish for me an episode of solstice.
Filter thoughts through my emotions,
Time them there to coincide with pleasure,
Leave me without worry, tears or hunger,
Tease my senses with spring imagined,
Kiss my soul with tempest fragile.
Smile upon me, Snow Moon, smile.Barbara G. Scroggins, Williston, VT, USA
Sunday Winter Morning SilenceCOMMENTS: Creatively illustrates harmony between humanity and the world. Eloquent in its expression of the peace and love shared by two who have worked to attain this moment. Lovely writing.We sit in Sunday winter morning silence
In the month of the raccoon moon,
You and I at opposite ends of the couch
Cradling each our thoughts and first cup of coffee,
Our toes and minds entwined
Beneath one fuzzy blanket.
This peace, of which we've years-long dreamed,
Becomes our mantle in this warm, old house
New home to us amid this stately stand of snow-flocked pine,
Quite undisturbed by one raucous cry of a crow.Gary Wade, Williston, VT, USA
We asked that poets tell of a less than happy Valentine's Day.
While each of these poems was written in a different perspective, some
seem to be from that oddball place where only laughing poets seem to wander!
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FIRST PLACE - Winner of a $10.00 electronic book gift certificate.
Red RoseGood ending. A mushy ending was expected, but this ends as abruptly as the Valentine's Day experience. Almost a haiku in its effect, bringing the reader back to ascertain the REAL meaning of that last line. |
SECOND PLACE - Winner of a box of chocolate.
When I See RedJUDGES' COMMENTS: Original metaphor. Good sense of humor. The poem flows. Red refers to anger and valentine. This is an on-topic triplet of a less than happy valentines day. Nice word choice. |
THIRD PLACE - Winner of a box of chocolate.
My True LoveJUDGES' COMMENTS: An irony that Valentine's Day can be humorous or serious. The poet learns that the lover has another. Sometimes a few choice lines can tell a long complex story. |
HONORABLE MENTION
Blind DateJUDGES' COMMENTS: Memorable! Title fits the poem. Humorous ending. Nice "sound" rhyme in "danced" and "pants." Freezes a weird situation in the mind's eye. Difficult to forget. |
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Pull my finger, Valentine ...COMMENTS: On the one hand, this piece is almost totally mystifying, but then again, it certainly paints a vivid picture! It's up to each reader to guess what happened here!It was silent, but deadly, and
I knew if he asked I would marry him
For trying not to embarrass me as
He gagged and began turning greenSJ Baldock, Lancaster TX, USA
Sr. CitizenCOMMENTS: Good rhyme and a nice flow. Humorous telling of a universal experience. Sad, but true, that some expressions of love seem to "dry-up" over time.When the old guy stopped bringing me a Valentine
His snub and change of heart suited me just fine
The only tears I've shed are the artificial kindLois Lay Castiglioni, Galveston, TX, USA
A Rare GiftCOMMENTS: On topic telling of oddball gift. Who could have ever guessed this type of intimate device existed, and that a poet would memorialize it in words!My love's
Valentine gift--
a belly-button light.
Whose "innie" confused with my rare
"outie"?SuzAnne C. Cole, Houston, TX, USA
Left in the OvenCOMMENTS: Bring on the fire extinguisher, and air out the house! Perfect form, simple but elegant word choices to bring the reader right into this darkly humorous picture.baking
edible hearts
just for my valentine
then he surprised me, home early -
burningDeborah P. Kolodji, Temple City, CA, USA
My Oddest ValentineCOMMENTS: Good rhyme, on topic. Vivid image of the expected and the surprisingly unexpected. Downright silly, but great fun! If readers don't get a good laugh from this, their funny bones need tweaking.I opened the door expecting chocolates and a single rose
to my horror stood a gigantic cupid spouting songs and prose
My love looked so ridiculous curtseying on his tippy toesTanya Larson, Kamloops, BC, Canada
What Goes Around, Comes AroundCOMMENTS: Ah, the universal "pay-back is heck" story, told in an ironic direct fashion. Been there, done both sides of that one. Nicely done.Being treated like the ugly duckling
Once spurned, he went away, dejected.
Only to return later as prince charming
And dumped me, like a hot potato - burning.Alma Philbert Linton, LaSalle, Quebec, Canada
Fire and IceCOMMENTS: Starts off in gushy greeting card manner, but ends up in divorce court. Quite a twisty treat! Nice writing."Be my Valentine! Let me take you to the moon!" he crooned,
I was his "all," his "everything" through June.
Now in snow and ice he whistles, blithely, someone else's tune.Barbara G. Scroggins, Williston, VT, USA.
Brass LovePOET'S NOTE: My parents' story is that they met on Feb 14, 1954 on a college band tour.College band bus merrily bouncing.
College freshman cavorting brazenly.
Off flies his cap, in two breaks her pencil,
True love encountered en route to Valentine’s concert.Marsha Steed, Roseville, CA, USA
A RoseCOMMENTS: Very funny telling of two people not on the same wavelength. Touching. Nice words. Lingering effect.I thought
so delicate
as I touched a rosebud
you flew, a dandelion seed
in wind.James M. Thompson, Baytown, TX, USA
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FIRST PLACE - Winner of a packet of dill seeds.
under gnarled tree rootsPOET'S COMMENT: "Thanks. A packet of dill will fill the bill." JUDGES' COMMENTS: The unexpected final line. The outlandishness of it. Yes, but perfect. Nature can't wait to hop out. Good contrast with the tree roots and the winter blanket. Captures the essence of late winter simply and beautifully. Exquisite word choice. Succinct, excellent. Complete story in three brief lines. |
SECOND PLACE - Winner of a packet of zucchini seeds.
snowflake falling onJUDGE'S COMMENTS: Snow bright! Great imagery. End of winter nature scenario brings the reader into the scene. Strong, elegant, almost sacred natural winter scene. Wonderful ending line. |
THIRD PLACE - Winner of a packet of garlic chives seeds.
red crocusJUDGES' COMMENTS: Spectacular image centers around a single, glorious blossom. With this Haiku, we see the end of one season and the beginning of the next in a tentative red push up through the snow. |
HONORABLE MENTION
first to arriveJUDGES' COMMENTS: Piquant, with a lively charm. A nice picture. Simple, strong, clearly portrayed. Memorable. |
HONORABLE MENTION
clouds and fog mistJUDGES' COMMENTS: Well written hint of anticipated spring. Red bloom is a mysterious image that leaves an after-image. |
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Furrowed rows of snowCOMMENTS: Not fully nature-oriented, man's hand sneaks into this thoughtful, mood-provoking piece.
portend the tiller's journey
bent stakes pray for springRon Blanton, Alpharetta, GA, USA
two bare sycamoresCOMMENTS: Poet depicts a chilling winter garden with vivid language. Typical winter scene made unique by wonderful wording and exceptional phrasing.
crooked white branches angling
in the empty airSuzAnne C. Cole, Houston, TX, USA
under dead wood fernCOMMENTS: The duality of "above" and "below" are neatly tucked into this natural winter setting.
a ladybug shivering
on a curled shootElaine Gentry, Houston, TX, USA
Snow-ghostly seedlingsCOMMENTS: Portrait of a pungent rural setting. Lovely particular language, well suited for Haiku.
in muzzy coffin of earth
labor for rebirthMaryann Hazen-Stearns, Ellenville, NY, USA
confused spring bulbsCOMMENTS: A scenario gardeners can relate to. The word-use of "confusion" at the beginning and "trickery" at end parallels the flip-flopping of the seasons.
sprout then freeze
western climate’s trickeryMarsha Steed, Roseville, CA, USA
green strawberriesCOMMENTS: Smile-making and hopeful. Very different contrast of colors and seasons. Luscious sounding.
waiting to redden in spring
winter’s dessertMarsha Steed, Roseville, CA, USA
morning sunlight showsCOMMENTS: Chillingly beautiful. Brimming with imagery. Gorgeous scene. Clipped pace well suited to this quick picture.
cold periwinkle spires
silver dripping glowCraig Soderquist, Universal City, TX, USA
Some poets used our three chosen words as a writing exercise.
But others took the opportunity to allow a quirky sense of humor full reign,
or let imagination soar into unexpected places. We are glad they
did.
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FIRST PLACE - Winner of an electronic $10.00 Book Gift Certificate
TwilightJUDGES' COMMENTS: Sweet, reflective poem. Nice job weaving elements of nature into the poem. Gentle reflection on married life. This poet made excellent use of the "assigned" three words, without putting too much emphasis upon their presence. A thoughtful poem here that draws the reader back to rejoin beginning with end, and middle with both, to make it extra special. This one is a keeper. |
SECOND PLACE
IndigestionJUDGES' COMMENTS: Requires study (with tongue in cheek.) A thoughtful unconjuncture... fun. Great voice. Mentioning the foods that bring on indigestion is a great touch. Sid Seizure is a reference to the King of television's golden age, Sid Caesar. Nice job! Bright and whimsical language accentuate a vivid scene. |
THIRD PLACE
Sophie's DreamJUDGES' COMMENTS: Perhaps it is a generalization to say that all poets are dog-lovers. Perhaps not. Yet, such a treasurable moment with mood restored deserves praise. Not a word extra or astray. Vivid. An observer wonders of the slumber of a dog. Excellent word choice for a nice portrait. An illustration of simple moments and pleasure -- yet written with zest and flavor. |
HONORABLE MENTION
E tu?JUDGES' COMMENTS: Six words, four brief lines -- understandable, succinct and to the point. Alliterative. Literate. Excellent! |
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Toddler TripCOMMENTS: Brings back memories of a trip to the zoo with a small child. This will be a great keepsake for the child. Nice Alliteration!Today we took
Our two year old
To town to see the zoo
She loved the tawny tigers
And they seem to like her tooLois Lay Castiglioni, Galveston, TX, USA
Sins of the FleshCOMMENTS: Gets better the more often it's read. Such perky rhyming, nor too subtle its implication. A toot. Humorous poem about two cavalier lovers. Very appropriate title. Delightful structure and form focuses on humor."It's just too delicious, my dear,"
she said, bending close to my ear.
"I hear she had two at once last night;
can you just imagine her delight?
If I cared as little for opinion as she;
I'd also eat my weight in baked brie."SuzAnne C. Cole, Houston, TX, USA
For WordsCOMMENTS: Greeting card or valentine for an expectant mother! Strong and concise, emphasizing rhythm and rhyme. Depends on cliché in an unexpected way. . .nicely done.You're just Too marvelous
to be Two of you
and; so I sing of love
To my Dear and only, TrueLouie Levy, Thousand Oaks, CA, USA
The Numbers GameCOMMENTS: A jigsaw poem, the parts needing fitted together to illustrate content full picture and closure. A chuckle here. Maybe two or three. The poet builds a conflict then decides to call someone else and is happy with the results. Good ending.I'm in serious pain here.
"Too bad", you said. "I'll call you in two days."
As if "two" is some mystical number...
I've always preferred odd numbers to even,
so I turn to your page in my phone book,
where rows of seven numbers each beckon.
I dial your home, your office, your cell.
Still no answer.
I turn to another page in my book;
those numbers worked like a charm.Terrie Relf, San Diego, CA, USA
Two Too Many To DoCOMMENTS: Interesting combination of rhyming couplets with a prose poem. Appropriate to today's hustle-bustle world.Two too many to do. He looked at the computer,
With the list of the day and its duties and Do-Fors.
Ten things here; can do eight in the time set for working.
Still he rolled up his sleeves and dove in without shirking.
Someone asked, "By the way, can you help get this typed up?"
"And you know, this needs sorting," another one piped up.
Every hour that he worked, someone else was there asking,
"Can you help get this done?" It got more and more tasking,
Till he threw up his hands; in frustration he thundered,
"Two too many to do? No, it’s more like two hundred!"Katherine Swarts, Houston, TX, USA
A SweaterCOMMENTS: This is a knitter's dilemma. Good process poem takes the reader directly into the action by using the jargon of the craft.Knit one, purl two.
Needles flying quickly like a falcon.
A cable here and there,
Should I use one bobble or two?
To the yarn store I need to go,
Panic sets in,
I'm out of supplies!
Would you like to come with me, too?Venus Tadrzak, Lakewood, OH, USA
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as the Best Poem of a particular month, only the knowledge that our editors
picked it over all the other prize winners of that month. However,
all poems chosen for BEST POEM of each month in the year 2002 will be automatically
entered in the BEST POEM OF THE YEAR 2002 competition, voted on by Sol
Magazine Members at the end of the year. The winners of that contest
will be awarded prizes and will be invited to enter Sol Magazine's Poet
Laureate 2003 Competition.
Last NightJUDGES' COMMENTS: This Cinquain has a carefully measured, haunting quality with a thought-provoking, surprise ending. Great writing. The poet takes us to a frightening night in the wilderness. Sticks to the rules of the original Cinquain, capturing a powerful image and build towards a surprising climax, and, as is common in the Cinquain, the first and last lines have two strongly accented syllables. Visual, audio, kinesthetic aplenty crowded into a nineteen word sentence. Stark and voluble combined.Did you
hear the crow cry,
see the wolf's silhouette
beneath the snow moon and did you
weep too?Judith Schiele, Brandon, MS, USA
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